Got feedbacks from Amanda:
Some on shot sizes/ angles like above. She also mentioned things about the order of my storyboard panels. Other than that, she said that the character shouldn't really 'communicate' to the audience (like panel 8). Panel 10 might confuse audience as we only see a pair of legs. It could have been another character. 27 is not needed. 32-34 not effective I guess?
Later on, showed it to Alan. Like Amanda, 32-34 is not effective. He said that's not what people do for that. He also suggested the girl offering him half the burger in the end. Anyway, will probably add the straw part.
Finally had it kind of approved, at least for the flow, and it's mostly thanks to Alan for it. Thank you! :)
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